Vergaro, the Unwilling Terror

Drawn completely in ballpoint pen

I drew this a year ago, please critique adn tell me what you think of this style, if you'd want to see more like this, of if I should stayy with my style.

In jail me and my freind would live RP at night to keep boredom away. He was a half-demon wheras I was a dragon rider. He came up with the plot and stuff and I did the details.

Vergaro here is central to a phophesy I wrote as part of the RP

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Greed will claim the Rider of power. In his quest for power he will make the ultimate tribute to force the forbidden line into bondage. Blinded by arrogance, he will cast aside the great sword of power and indulge in the worlds darkest powers. The Rider of power will make a pactwith the Black One for power beyond elven constraints. Commanding the armies of darkness and death and using the Unwilling Terror he will march on the light, only to be cut down by his equal and opposite.

The Unwilling Terror will be freed to wreak havoc, an unstoppable force of darkness. The world will fall into shadow, never to emerge.

The Unwilling Terror will be freed to wreak havoc, an unstoppable force of darkness. But the light will drive the shadows from its soul. The sun will rise on the Unwilling Terror and love will replace shadow. Love will create a fusion of purity and redemption who will bathe the world in light for eternity.

The Unwilling Terror will face these two paths, the choice must be made alone, but the fate of all rests with one.

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I used the word "power" a lot in hindsight... huh... and the whole branching thing was confusing to say the least. But hey, it was for an RP, not a novel.